By changing "non-developer" to "developer" (moving "beginner" from the end to the beginning doesn't really change the length). That's quite an intrusive change, it seems to me.
How I, a non-developer, read the tutorial you, a developer, wrote for me, a beginner
How I, a beginner developer, read the tutorial you, a developer, wrote for me
My apologies, SoKamil, for cutting off the ending in the comparison. I wanted to highlight the difference and figured the first part is where the difference was. As in, they are still a non-developer and shouldn't have to learn all the details so it doesn't matter if they are just a regular non-developer a beginner non-developer.
The hn submitter presumably edited for length